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PostSubject: My depressing poem (still working)   6/22/2010, 2:32 am

[oolor=green]This is just somthing i wrote out of bordem, yes it dose mean somthing, but nothing anyone needs to be worried about. study Very Happy its not finished but will be and probably edited a little.
No i'm not a depressed Emo. Enjoy
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As i sit in the rain,
I look at my wrists,
covered in blood.
The pain is my Meth.
I cut again,
Another slice of skin falls off.
Bloody and brused.
I'm abused.
Laying in a puddle of my blood,
and a slight flood.
I'm slowly slipping out,
Soon i'll be running about,
I'm in my finaly rest place
With her beutiful face.
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   6/22/2010, 8:57 am

to messy....
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   6/22/2010, 1:05 pm

Yah i just wrote it yesterday lul nub l2read
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/4/2010, 3:14 am

I think it sounds off and too simple but it is kinda cool
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/4/2010, 5:08 am

it sound gothic-lol u goth?


its good though

can u tell me how to put sig under every comment like u hav?
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/4/2010, 6:00 am

3d last u wrote about might want to make that out.

Sounds a bit better then to me but hey its ur post make it whatever u want from it. Wink

Nice done though. Cool
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/8/2010, 9:13 am

It sucks
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/8/2010, 1:49 pm

Ring Why are you such a hater you have nothing better to do then flame me, and im sick of it so please save everybodys time and kill yourself now. Thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/9/2010, 1:32 pm

He would waste the cops time if he would do that...
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/9/2010, 8:34 pm

I LOVE YOU BRIANVDB lol Razz
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PostSubject: Re: My depressing poem (still working)   7/10/2010, 7:40 am

i am rabbit wrote:
I LOVE YOU BRIANVDB lol Razz
I know but im to ghetto for you. Cool
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